Some people ask me why I persist with writing poetry on my blog, especially as they don’t elicit a whole lot of comments. I tell them its because I like using poems as a form of expression and that I love to share them with people. Even if one person happens to like what I wrote then I think it was worth the effort.
I wrote this after a personal experience I had in what seems to be eons ago. Some of you may not agree with my experience, unless that is you are a hot blooded Aussie male, who more than likely experienced exactly the same thing I did. And so, without further ado, My Passionate Encounter!
I got her home late one night
Picked her up at a bar, without a fight
I have wanted her, for so long
I could not wait for the last song.
Up the stairs we went, the door I locked
I held her close, I was so hot.
With a struggle I removed her top
I gazed upon her form, I could not stop
In desperation I tore off her wrap
You could almost hear the dripping tap
Perspiration covered her naked form
The beads of sweat visible now the wrap was torn
My feverish mouth claimed her own
The sensation so great my mind was blown
It was not long before she was spent
In frustration against the wall she went
Though short, for it did not last long
I knew I did nothing wrong
For as she lay there, once held dear
She truly was one heck of bottled beer
I hope you enjoyed that? It was actually and old joke or something that I turned into a poem because I couldn’t remember the joke itself enough to tell it as it should be.
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Lol Brilliant poem man… and I for one enjoy reading the rhymes from the Australian eye, hell poetry aint a crime and it helps time fly. (i know shit but hey 2second on the spur)
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Not too shabby for off the cuff poetry Donace
Keep up the poems, always cool and entertaining. Too many blogs have no personality attached. You have to do something different to stand out from the crowd
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Thanks Steve, I’m not sure that poetry will help me ‘stand out from the crowd’ mate, but I reckon slipping one in now and again can’t do too much harm.
Yeah, I had a feeling I knew where that one was going, but it was still a nice one. :wink_wp:
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That’s only because you think I have a one track mind Mitch.
I like it! I’m glad you’re still sharing poems… it gives me the inspiration to go dig through my older poems and put something up again, since it’s been awhile since I had the poetic writing on my site. :)
~ Kristi
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Thanks Kristi, you know I will be there when you do.
I did just revive one of my older ones with a little something extra. I wrote about ballroom dancing, and now have a video to go with it of my first performance with my hubby! :)
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That was BRILLIANT Kristi. I loved it and had to rush over to YouTube to give it a 5 star rating. What a way to start the day. Thanks mate.
Lol I thought the poem was about moments before having sex, I should’ve read the title carefully before reading the post…nice poem anyway
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I’m glad you liked it Rick, the fact that you got caught right up until the end meant that the poem’s intention worked.
Interesting poem. Reading it gives lot of imagination in the mind…
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Tep, stimulating the mind, and letting the juices flow, that’s what I’m all about. :tongue_wink_ee:
This is a wonderful poem, you really have a talent in poetry. Can I copy your poem and let my hubby read it, don’t worry I would never ever change the author’s name. I just like him to read your poem of yours.
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Sure Reise, I hope he gets a kick out of it.
Very nice :D
Didn’t I read somewhere that this was a “family man” blog? :P
I too write the odd poem, but I feel I can’t publish them because of the content.
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Yep, I reckon you did Dave, that’s why I posted the ‘G’ version.
Nice, don’t stop posting those poems. Even if people don’t appreciate it, it’s still nice. Keep it up and you’ll get even better.
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Get better Stancje? What are you insinuating my friend?
I figured it wasn’t a female when you got to the taking off the wrap part unless she was a mummy, then the only thing covering her naked form would be dust. Keep them coming a thumbs up from me for the poems.
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Gee Kahled, haven’t you ever taken a wrap off of a woman before? Just do a search on wrap dresses.
I stumbled this post. I like it. It reminded me I have to add a few of my poems to my new blog.
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Thanks Deneil, I appreciate the Stumble and I’m glad you liked the post.
You welcome, I was going to tweet it as well but didn’t see a tweet button.
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Yeah, I don’t have one. Still, it’s the thought that counts.
Too funny mate. I had to reread it once I got to the end. Yes there is nothing quite like a cold beer on a hot day.
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Wow, that was intense. You had me there for a while.
I sometime also post poems but not that often. I’m no poet, but it sometimes nice to get rid of those thoughts and feelings.
Another one pleeeeeeease :)
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I’m glad you liked it George, and if you are really interested in reading more of my poems you will find them in the ‘poetry’ category. :smile1_ee:
Same like me, can’t write poems, but just some thoughts and feelings of mine. It’s nice to share in blog.
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Great poem! Love your poem even if it’s only about a bottle of beer. Please do not stop writing poems!
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Thanks Dhananjay, I had fun writing this one and am glad that others were able to enjoy it. :grin1_ee:
Nice earlier 4/5 paragraphs, Lol..!
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I am glad you liked it, perhaps you would also like some of my other quirky poems. :cheese1_ee:
For a second I thought you had taken up writing Erotica.
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I have given it some thought Rose, but at this moment in time.
Bringing the old stuff back, eh? I remembered this one, because I already knew the gag.
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You don’t have a copy of that gag do you? It would be interesting to see how much I’ve strayed from the original.
No, it’s not one of the jokes I’ve kept over the years; sorry about that.
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